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Lady Persephone
There's more to life than mere existence.
"The universe is change; our life is what our thoughts make it." - Marcus Aurelius
Light
The night has a thousand eyes,
The day but one;
Yet the light of the bright world dies
With the dying sun.
The mind has a thousand eyes,
And the heart but one;
Yet the light of a whole life dies
When its love is done.
- Francis W. Bourdillon

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02-20-2012 #12
I think you could make this drawing more personal. it feels like it illustrates a generality, instead of a personal reality. You have a beautiful hand. Both your pensmanship and your strokes are elegant and confidant. When you denie your subject the right to a head-face, you take away its individuality. I'm pretty sure you want it to be somewhat if not entirely self-portraiture, show yourself!

I made a drawing about my bad-blood and my bad habit of throwing up everything I ate in my drawing class...Its the only drawing I got a B+ for, my other drawings gave me A+...sometimes its hard to really transmit the intensity of such an omnipresent and controling disorder.
You're on to a really good start, dont give up!!!




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