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sushi?
06-23-2011, 08:25 PM
No one can see that girl trapped in glass
She screams to the hearth of the fire trapped deep within her frail bones
Her soul shatters everytime
Without even so much as sparing a glance,
he brooms up the broken shards on the floor and forgets it
But more will fall
More will cover the ground
Nothing will stop it until he himself steps on it
Until he himself understands,
just how the blood racing down her wrist feels like
As though the fire was escaping
She will continue to burn,
to be consumed by the flames in her own little glass world

err I felt like writing a poem, is it ok? Thought?

SkinniesDown
06-27-2011, 09:45 PM
It's nice :) Shitloads of great imagery.

GreedvsNeed
06-28-2011, 04:19 AM
you truly have let me feel the story in your piece of lovely art....

Savage.Eyes
07-02-2011, 08:13 AM
Brilliant.

louder-now
07-02-2011, 02:24 PM
This is really good, do you normally write poems? You should.

sushi?
07-03-2011, 03:45 PM
Thanks for the replies :) I don't normally write poetry, I was just in a mood I guess.
But now maybe I'll start to write some!

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