fictionpress is really fun

[fwyzing]

fictionpress.com/~greencandlewick

it'd be awesome if people could read some and tell me what you think :) a lot is about my ed

[Jacklinger]

So Tires, So Cold is my favorite. I really like that one. Your other work is good also but that one really stands out to me, because, I suppose, I can relate to it more than the others. I guess that's part of what makes good poetry good - how many people can relate to it? You're very good and I hope you keep writing. :)

[fwyzing]

thank you Jacklinger :) it's always inspiring to get reviews and I totally agree. To me, that's what poetry is all about. You can write all you want to yourself but when it comes to other people reading it, what's most important is their ability to relate and connect

[skylines]

I reviewed one of your stories, I like how you keep it simple.